Could not stop laughing the entire time… Shane is hilarious
Could not stop laughing the entire time… Shane is hilarious
Lovesessed is a short novel that can be purchased as a free ebook on Amazon. Being the type to enjoy reading regardless of who the work is by, I decided to give it a chance because there is always a possibility of finding an untapped treasure in unknown authors. Unfortunately, this work was in my opinion mediocre. I try my best to not be harsh on writers because I know that everyone has their own taste and style of writing, but this one I just can’t let go of.
To start off, the style of the writing was that of a child. There were misspelled words and grammatical errors all over the place in this book. Apparently the author took it upon herself to self-publish her novel, which I might add, there is no shame in. I would do the same thing myself. It is obvious, though, that with the numerous errors in the book, there is no way that it was properly edited.
I could honestly look past the errors in the writing if the story had more depth. Lovesessed is basically about a fourteen year old girl that is so obsessed with a teen rock star that she enlists her friend’s help to concoct a “love potion” for lack of a better term. That could have potential to be a really good story for someone within the same age group as the main character Phoebe. Unfortunately the way it was written made it look like more of a bad fan fiction novel than anything else. The reason I say it seems like a bad fan fiction is the fact that the rock star that Phoebe is “in love” with is the middle brother of a band of three brothers. That sounds a lot to me like the author has at some point or another been a fangirl for either Hanson or the Jonas Brothers. I will say that there is nothing wrong with writing fan fiction and there’s nothing wrong with being a fangirl. I myself am a Jonas Brothers fan, however delusional fan fictions should not be made into a novel. That’s when things just cross a line into the obsessive territory.
That’s all I’d really like to say on Lovesessed. If you’ve read it, I’d love to hear your opinion since this blog post was just mine.
<3 Tara
Ready for pictures for the church directory!
Yup this is happening… Never gets old 😎
Chicken noodle soup for dinner. Trying to fight off what feels like the beginning of a cold (at Home)
These won’t last 24 hours 🍪
Now reading…
This stuff is amazing!!!
Now reading…